Monday 25 November 2013
Letter Writing
WALT write a formal letter.
31 Tunis Rd
Panmure
Auckland
New Zealand
Date:25th of November,2013.
Address:Guy Sebastian
Six Degrees Management
Suite 201
282-290 Oxford Street
Bondi Junction, NSW 2022
Australia
Dear Guy Sebastian,
My name is Pio and I come from Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, Panmure. On the 7th of December we are singing it start with us and we are pretty good at singing it.
I picked it starts with us this is in our hand and together we will not be moved because of the message that it starts with us and not anyone else and this is in our hands and that to me we have the power.
Yours faithfully,
Pio
Thursday 21 November 2013
Friday 15 November 2013
Monday 11 November 2013
Friday 8 November 2013
The Trouble With Shadow
Hi everyone if you want to look at my work click on the link belowhttps://docs.google.com/a/tamakiprimary.school.nz/document/d/1Gh_hrrJGGW4HRKHm2AWHJmW_yMChSl-M2qgEzdwd6K8/edit
Friday 1 November 2013
Narrative Writing
Hi everyone if you want to look at my writing click on the link below.
https://docs.google.com/a/tamakiprimary.school.nz/document/d/1rtdHBv2uHRA9sATQU0tUWFOyQbUTZajL92jf1T760n0/edit
https://docs.google.com/a/tamakiprimary.school.nz/document/d/1rtdHBv2uHRA9sATQU0tUWFOyQbUTZajL92jf1T760n0/edit
Wednesday 30 October 2013
Wednesday 23 October 2013
Tuesday 22 October 2013
Tuesday 24 September 2013
Monday 23 September 2013
Tuesday 6 August 2013
Today i have been reading a school journal part 3 number 3 2009.I used graffiti creator for my title and please click on the link bellow.
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Limericks
LI: To write limericks
SC: It must have 5 lines lines, the last word of the first and last line must be the same and all the last words of each line must rhyme.
Limericks are nonsensical 5 line rhymes that were made popular hundreds of years ago by Edward Lear.
Here is an example:
There was an old person of Pisa,
Whose daughters did nothing to please her;
She dressed them in gray ,
and banged them all day,
Round the walls of the city of Pisa.
Use the following link to check out some more of his collection. Use names of local/familiar places to include in your limericks. When complete select a suitable illustration or draw one of your own using tux/sumo paint, share it with your teacher and upload it to your blog.
Once there was a price that live in a pit he went up and down with a big as frown he wanted to have
friends but all he had was pigs he went to the river with shaggy clothes and washed his face and he was beautiful he told his mum what happened his mum.
Friday 2 August 2013
Thursday 11 July 2013
Friday 5 July 2013
My Dream-Bedroom
“Topic: My Dream Bedroom
The purpose of descriptive writing is to make our readers see, feel, and hear what we have seen, felt, and heard. Whether we're describing a person, a place, or a thing, our aim is to reveal a subject through vivid and carefully selected details.
Unfold sample together
How did the writer describes the dream home using the five senses?
How is the writer’s use show not tell the story? Give example
How is the writer describes her dream home?
Where would this dream house built and why?
Before you start planning you need to questions about your Dream Bedroom and write your questions down.
What sort of questions would you be thinking about during your plan?
My Dream House – Essay Sample
Living life large as people may say it, is my kind of lifestyle, my dream is to make it big and enjoy the finest things in life. Indeed, this can only come with dedication, hard work and a master plan. My dream house can be described in two words, classy and comfortable. The setting should be at the beach where I can view the ocean and enjoy cool breeze; this would also give me the chance to enjoy my hobby, that it swimming.
The design should be a mixture of the old and modern architecture and rises above the ground to be held by large beacons. The high rise would ensure that the trees do not block my ocean view. The color would be sky blue that would match and blend with the nearby ocean waters and which also happens to be my favorite color. The roofing should be fitted in that it is able to monitor the beach and ocean activities and acts as a remote weather station.
In the inside, the plain white color would brace the walls with paintings from exhibitions. I like paintings from the African continent and the ancient Asian art. In addition, sculptures would come in handy in the interior decorations. The black leather couches would have a clear appeal to the house and make it comfortable. Furnishing the house would be very easy as my preference would be artistic furniture. A lazy bag is also a favorite piece, not because am lazy but because it ensures creativity and relaxation; additionally, the Jacuzzi would be a no missing feature. I would not go for the many roomed and large houses since they have a feel of loneliness.
In conclusion, my dream house stands out because of the setting, design and the blend of a modern and ancient structure.
My Dream bedroom
My Dream bedroom will be a floating water bed with a slide.To slide down on the floating water bed and the colour will be gloden yellow and my house will be made out of medle and the carpet will be soft as sheep skin.And a aquarium in my basment and a indoor swimming pools 3 of them in my room and my dads room and my sister room.And a lg smart tv in my room and a xbox360.And a water slide at my back yard and a huge swimming pool.And a 100 ich lg tv in the sitting room made out of gold.And body guards in the frount yard.
Tuesday 9 April 2013
safety cycle
Cycle Safety with Bigfoot Adventures!
What do you need to do to check the safety of your bike?
- check breaks if it works.
- check red reflecter on the back of your bike.
- check bolts are tight.
- check if wheels are pumped and work.
- check you have the right gear.
What do you need to wear while riding your bike?
- high-vis
- helmet
- shoes
- bright t-shrit
- check shoe liecse are tucked in your shoes.
What do you need to do, by law, when riding a bike?
- wear your helmet
- twos are in shoes
- check chains work.
Helmet safety: What do you need to look for?
- helmet
- check if is right
- check if it fits your head
- check if is not broken
- check if it is the right size for your head
List all the parts of the bike:
wheel
seat
pedals
wheels
chaine
handles
brakes
Watch these clips about bike safety:
Wednesday 3 April 2013
Aiga poem
Samoa
My ancestors come from Samoa
They have been there for a long time
They were bounty hunters
They had spears when they were looking for food
They hunted for sharks,crabs,fish and snakes
They make me feel, happy,glad, lucky and supported.
Friday 22 March 2013
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