Friday 26 September 2014

Persuasive writing

WALT create a plan for persuasive text.

Success Criteria
Include my opinion (agree or disagree)
Give reasons for my opinion
discuss consequences that are caused by my reasons.

Statement: Humans are very good at looking after the sea and sea life.  

My Opinion: I disagree


Reason 1:We our polluting the seas with our waste. The pollution spreads out deeper and further and ruins the sea creatures environment
Consequences:The sea creatures’ habitats will be polluted and  they will die or have to move away.
Reason 2:littering will go down a drain thru a tunnel and out into the sea.
Consequences:If they litter the sea creatures will eat the rubbish and choke and pass away
Reason 3:overfishing.
Consequences:If you over fish there won't be enough fish.



Conclusion:


We our polluting the seas with our waste. The pollution spreads out deeper and further and ruins the sea creatures environment. The sea creatures’ habitats will be polluted and they will die or have to move away.

People are still littering.When the wind blows or rain drops the piece of rubbish will drift of slide down the drain.

A-Z of the Ocean

Wednesday 24 September 2014

Why can't mammal's breath underwater

Why can't mammal’s breath under water and fish can?
Mammal’s can’t breath underwater because they don’t have gills to help breath.Fish have gills to  help them sense and breath underwater,Sharks are  linked to fish because they have gills to do the same thing.

Wednesday 3 September 2014

At the tournament i had to join the year 7&8 team because there wasn’t enough players that are over 50’s. We played at marist rugby club the first team we vers was glenbrae they were a little bit competitive but they didn’t play dirty so we had a good game losing. The next team we played were st pires they were rough as they hit me in the stomach and william got slapped on the eye and cavhyon got hit in the stomach to. The next it was mixed there was glenbrae and st pires together but only 7 players were allowed to play and we only had two glenbrae players on our side. It was a cool game we had a good time playing those games.