Friday 26 September 2014

Persuasive writing

WALT create a plan for persuasive text.

Success Criteria
Include my opinion (agree or disagree)
Give reasons for my opinion
discuss consequences that are caused by my reasons.

Statement: Humans are very good at looking after the sea and sea life.  

My Opinion: I disagree


Reason 1:We our polluting the seas with our waste. The pollution spreads out deeper and further and ruins the sea creatures environment
Consequences:The sea creatures’ habitats will be polluted and  they will die or have to move away.
Reason 2:littering will go down a drain thru a tunnel and out into the sea.
Consequences:If they litter the sea creatures will eat the rubbish and choke and pass away
Reason 3:overfishing.
Consequences:If you over fish there won't be enough fish.



Conclusion:


We our polluting the seas with our waste. The pollution spreads out deeper and further and ruins the sea creatures environment. The sea creatures’ habitats will be polluted and they will die or have to move away.

People are still littering.When the wind blows or rain drops the piece of rubbish will drift of slide down the drain.

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